Grand Game Empyrean’s Flight – Update

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Hi all,

After a trying few weeks and many sleepless nights, I’ve finally re-edited and, where necessary, rewritten Empyrean 2.  If you read the earlier version, you will notice that huge chunks of the story have changed, especially in the later part.

I’ve been forced to work through this book faster than I liked, so there may be a few more errors and inconsistencies than usual.  Please let me know if you spot any errors/plot holes so I can correct them!

I’ll be reposting all the chapters over the next few hours. Hope you enjoy the story and please share your thoughts when you’re done!

Happy reading, 

Tom


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